The big scary creature was hiding in the long grass. It's big long rough tail was so big it made the ground shake for a few seconds. The big scary beast was a fierce creature it had spikes as sharp as a knife. The creature had sharp teeth like a shark that can bite you in half. The beast is might be hungry he might be looking for a snack.
I can feel the breeze blowing in my face. I can hear the Taniwha getting closer. I can smell his yuck smelly breath and his warm sticky breath on my neck. I can hear the big loud beast rrrrrrraaaawwww it was as loud as a lion and a alligator fighting.