Friday, 24 February 2017

sea side

one scorching hot day we decided to go to the beach. At the beach I saw some shells. All shells have names like we have names. Like scallops mussels and oysters.some shells are broken because they are really old. I saw this really coll and pretty shell the colours on it were so cool  it was some blue and a little bit of purple and pink. I had so much fun before I wanted to go again.

1 comment:

  1. Talofa lava Jane, I really like how you have used the word "scorching" to make your writing sound flash. Just some advice, make sure you check and double check that you have all the capital letters in the right places before you post but this is amazing Jane I can see that you enjoy writing a lot. Malo Lava Jane.